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Thursday 25 March 2021

Writing Week 7

I Would like to Chang the swimming


I would like to Chang the swimming pool. because it can be bigger. and the pool well not samli bad when people walk in. and the basroom because everything day so it deos not samli bad. I would like to Chang the floor because when people walk in they well not seep on the gown because off the pool water. I Would like to have a AG shed because when it run and people are not swimming they can go to the AG shed.



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